I have a few things to help make sense of my storyboards. The long lines that you find between two thumbnails means that the thumbnail on the right side of the line is a new scene. Also I started the first few pages with the characters name next to what they say but after a few pages I stopped that because the only person I have speaking is always the character that is the main focal point of that drawing and it added more room for dialog. This is my first draft and I've already begun making changes, mostly adding more gags. I'll take the feedback I get from this draft and add it to my 2nd draft before re-posting.